Merge pull request #941 from AaEnnDeeErrEeEss/patch-2

Update README.md for make-your-game

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 ## make-your-game
 
-As times passes and technology evolves, the human brain has been requesting
+With the passing of time and evolution of technology, the human brain has been requesting
 more and more stimuli to keep the brain occupied. Boredom happens whenever
 people don't receive enough of these stimuli. And you are not receiving enough
-of it, so you decide to do **your own game**. And you also decide to just use
+of it, so you decide to make **your own game**. And to make it more challenging you decide to use
-JavaScript as a challenge.
+JavaScript to make it.
 
-Your game will be for single player only and you will have to create your
+Your game will be single player only and you will have to create your
-own engine and tools so that the game works. And as you try to search all sort
+own engine and tools for the game. And as you try to search for all sorts
-of information you start to remember all those [60fps memes](https://pics.me.me/60-fps-59-fps-35518800.png).
+of information you start to remember all the [60 FPS memes](https://pics.me.me/60-fps-59-fps-35518800.png).
 
 ### Objectives
 
-Here are some of the features you want to implement on your game:
+Here are some of the features you want to implement in your game:
 
-- Run the game at least at **60fps** at all time
+- Game runs at at least **60 FPS** at all times
-- You must not have frame drops!
+- No frame drops!
 - Proper use of **RequestAnimationFrame**
 - It is very hard to predict performances in JS. So measure performances to see if your code is fast. This will be tested!
 - Pause menu, that includes:
   - Continue
   - Restart
-- A score board that must present the following tasks:
+- A score board that displays the following metrics:
-  - **Countdown clock / Timer**: That will indicate the amount of time the player has until the game ends or the time that the game took to finish
+  - **Countdown clock or Timer** that will indicate the amount of time the player has until the game ends or the time that the game has been running
-  - **Score**: That will keep a score count of the amount of XP/points that the player got while playing
+  - **Score** that will display the current score (XP or points)
-  - **Lives**: That indicates the amount of lives that the player has left
+  - **Lives** that shows the number of lives that the player has left
 
-You must not use frameworks or canvas, the game must be implemented using just plain JS/DOM and HTML
+You must not use frameworks or canvas, the game must be implemented using plain JS/DOM and HTML only
 
 ### Instructions
 
-Animation must have consistent motion, so in order to have a smooth animation (without interruptions or better named: jank animation) you must achieve a special number, [**60fps**](https://blog.algolia.com/performant-web-animations/). You can see more about performance [here](../good-practices/README.md)
+Animation must have consistent motion, so in order to have a smooth animation (without interruptions or so called jank animation) you must achieve the special number, [**60 FPS**](https://blog.algolia.com/performant-web-animations/). You can see more about performance [here](../good-practices/README.md)
 
-In order to play the game you must use only the keyboard. The usage of keyboard must be smooth, in other words you must not spam the key to move the player. But instead you must, for example maintain the key pressed and the player must continue to do the proper action. If the key is released the player should stop doing the action.
+In order to play the game the player must only use the keyboard. The controls must be smooth, in other words you should not need to spam a key to take actions in the game. Instead, for example, if a key is kept pressed, the player must continue to do the relevant action. If the key is released the player should stop doing the action.
 
-Basically every motion triggered by a key must not jank or stutter.
+Basically, motions triggered by a key must not jank or stutter.
 
-For the pause menu you must be able to pause, restart and continue the game whenever you want to do so. The frames should not drop if paused.
+For the pause menu you must be able to pause, restart, and continue the game whenever you want to do so. The frames should not drop if paused.
 
 ### Pre-Approved List
 
@@ -54,17 +54,17 @@ Your game will have to respect the genre of one of these games listed below. In
 
 ### Dev Tools
 
-We highly advise you to use Developer Tools present in every browser (usually with the key combination: Ctrl+Shift+I or in the Tools tab).
+We strongly advise you to use Developer Tools available in every browser (can be accessed using hot keys that depend on the browser or from the browser's Tools menu option).
 
-Below we briefly explain the tools that will help the most for this project:
+Developer tools that will help the most with developing this project:
 
 - **Page Inspector**: You can view and edit page content and layout.
 - **Web Console**: You can see your `console.log`s and interact with the page using JavaScript.
 - **Performance Tool**: You can analyze your site's general responsiveness, performance, Javascript and layout performance.
 
-The one tool that most will help you is the Performance Tool. There you can record a sample of your actions on the site and analyze the FPS, check for frame drops, how many time is your functions taking to execute, amongst other useful stuff.
+The tool that will help you the most is the Performance Tool. There you can record a sample of your actions on the site and analyze the FPS, check for frame drops, how much time your functions take to execute, and other useful metrics monitoring.
 
-In the developer tools you can also find a Paint Flashing option that will highlight every paint that happens in your page as you perform actions in it.
+In the developer tools you can also find a Paint Flashing option that will highlight every paint that happens in your page as actions are performed on it.
 
 This project will help you learn about: